Commentary 7

Bar 114 Bar 115

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:24 p.m.

diminuendo hairpin and continuation of dotted line from crescendo instead of ff 114 (cf. A); RH ties over barline omitted


Bar 115 Bar 116 Bar 117

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:24 p.m.

different dynamic conception, with crescendo through 115–116 leading to ff in 117


Bar 116 Bar 117

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:24 p.m.

RH slur omitted


Bar 118

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:24 p.m.

end of RH slur imprecisely notated (cf. A and 122–123, 124–125)


Bar 119 Bar 120

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:24 p.m.

LH slur omitted


Bar 120

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:24 p.m.

end of RH slur imprecisely notated (cf. A and 122–123, 124–125)


Bar 123

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:24 p.m.

staccato dot to LH note 1 omitted