Commentary 6

Bar 6 Bar 7

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:13 p.m.

RH phrasing modified


Bar 18

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:13 p.m.

no break in phrasing


Bar 18 Bar 19

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:13 p.m.

badly positioned RH tie


Bar 20

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:13 p.m.

no break in LH phrasing


Bar 22

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:13 p.m.

no break in LH phrasing


Bar 28

By OCVE, Oct. 31, 2014, 4:13 p.m.

no lower note RH beat 3